I can feel all moody just by reading your poems.I like it very much.
Hey fj I really loved the story of water lilies don't fly. It seemed tragic, the ending.. poor water lily...
sorry to ruin the magic for you xng but she lives. She was able to swim to the surface and float. That little bit on the bottom is the aftermath of her talking to herself.
I was thinking like she fell from the cliff to the waters below and floated... dead... like Ophelia in... ummm... Macbeth I think but nevertheless I liked it. Why don't you make some more?^_^
I will as the time comes. Short stories aren't really my thing.
Shut up Tiffany
She's shouting...
She's shouting again...
She just wont stop
Hands clasp around my ears,
as I beg her to stop
She's a ghost in my mind
She is that banshee that screams at me...
Slowly leading me to the edge
She's shouting...
She's shouting again...
She'll never forgive me for abandoning her
Serious... I have a very trouble life... I like to read your poem and writings...
... abandoning her. ^___^ Luck me this never happened to me... i actually abandoning they... Maybe i dont found the right one. ^___^
Thanks for your awesome poems.
I'm going to be deleting my posts of poetry. I found a good publishing site. So don't be surprised if none of my work is up anymore
sorry guys.
So, could you give us the link of this publishing site? For us read your great works. ^___^